Critique
Service...
"A
large number of people have talent as writers or storytellers
- these talents can be strengthened and sharpened".
Stephen King
What
is a critique?
A critique is a one-off written review about your manuscript.
I personalize each critique according to your needs. Normally
I write on the actual document with margin notes, include
end of chapter summaries and finish with an overall review.
I am also available to answer any email queries outside
of the critique
NEW
IN
I am
joined in my critique service by friend and colleague, Robb
Grindstaff. Robb is an editor based in Washington D.C. and
brings a wonderful array of critique skills to Streamwriting.
If you are submitting your mss to American agents or publishers
and want to make sure it ‘fits’ over there then
he is your man. Please email me for more information.
‘Book
Doctor’ Package
If you are still writing your book and want feedback on
the story so far, you can send me some sample chapters and
I will steer you in the right direction. I call this the
Book Doctor Package because I help nurse your writing and
bring it into the light of day.
‘Submission
Service’ Package
For a fixed fee, I also offer a ‘submission service
package’ in which I look at the first 50 pages, the
covering letter and the synopsis. Please email me for more
details. Hannah@streamwriting.com
What
exactly is a reader?
My knowledge of the industry comes from my experience as
a reader. When your script/manuscript is sent to a producer
or an agent it goes straight to a reader (who is usually
either the assistant of the person you've targeted or an
in-house reader or freelance). The reader then writes a
synopsis and more importantly an analysis of the script/manuscript
with a final recommendation at the end. The producer or
agent decides whether or not to read your work based solely
on this coverage.
Do
you read short stories & articles?
The answer is yes! If you want feedback on a short story
you want to submit for publication or a competition then
send it to me. Similarly if you have written an article
and want fresh advice I can help you on that.
Are
you available to write blogs, articles & ebooks?
Again, the answer is yes. Contact me on my email to discuss
my rates.
What
do I do next?
Simply send me an email. Hannah@streamwriting.com
How
Do I Send My Material To You?
Via email as a word document. Please do not send me hard
copies.
Email to Hannah@streamwriting.com
Payment
Payment is received in advance either through paypal or
via my bank account. I will confirm receipt and then ask
you to submit your material. The turnaround time is anything
from one to three weeks.
We
can discuss my hourly rate and any specific report requirements
during our initial email correspondence. Any telephone conversations
or additional critiques will again be charged at the hourly
rate.
"Almost
anyone can be an author; the business is to collect money
and fame from this state of being"
A.A. Milne
Testimonials
Despite having published a number of science and popular
science books over the years, one of which – Sperm
Wars – reached the dizzy heights of number 7 in the
Sunday Times best-seller list back in 1996 and, in translation,
achieved something similar in places as far afield as Germany,
Poland and China, when I turned my hand to writing fiction
a few years ago I have to confess I struggled. Although
my agent sent the eventual manuscript out to a number of
publishers it was always returned with the dreaded ‘Interesting
but…’ In the end I grew so close to the novel
I just couldn’t see what I was doing wrong and finding
your Manuscript Critique service on the Internet decided
I had nothing to lose by sending it to you. I certainly
haven’t been disappointed. Your fresh eyes and experience
combined with a real perception of where the character and
plot development was failing gave the project – and
me - a whole new lease of life. And just over a year later
I received that response from publishers which all writers
crave. Primal is being published by Random House in the
UK in June, the USA in July, and – in translation
– in at least The Netherlands and Israel soon after.
In my acknowledgments I’ve credited you with “rejuvenating
criticism” because that was what it was. Without your
input, I know the manuscript would still be languishing
in an archive on my computer. Many thanks.
R.W. Spain
"Working
on my book with Hannah has been a great experience. Her
feedback and guidance is invaluable especially as she has
a way to coax the better writer out of me! My style has
deepened and with that my confidence has grown. The collection
of ideas that I started with has been turned into a real
book, one that has a far greater chance of publication than
anything I could have produced on my own. As an investment
I can wholeheartedly recommend it, it is the best one I
have made for a long time."
J.M.J - Spain
"I
decided early on that if I wanted readers and publishers
to value my writing, then I had to invest in developing
my skills. I was really impressed with Hannah and did not
hesitate in booking her services for six months. My collection
of short stories are now completed thanks to Hannah's invaluable
insight, motivation and genuine care. And most importantly,
I have also found an agent."
J.C - England
"With
Hannah's help my writing has moved onto another level. Her
feedback has given me an insight into where my strengths
lie, shown me how to keep the narrative flow moving and
engaging, and opened my eyes to some of the pitfalls into
which I occasionally stumbled. The opening four chapters
of my novel are now tight and gleaming bright."
L.S. - England
2009
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